Wednesday, September 10, 2014

Our Stories describing Bubble Wrap

Yesterday we wrote stories describing Bubble Wrap.  We tried to use lots of descriptive words and language features.

Jisita  The bubble wrap feels like a furry bear.  It is crumbly and it looks like a shiny crystal sea.  It is so smooth.

Emma Jayne  The bubble wrap is soft and it is bumpy.  I like Bubble wrap.  The little bubbles make sounds that pop.

Ammon  Bubble Wrap looks like the sun sparkling on the river.  They feel like crumbly crumbs.  They sound like a popping noise.

Ethan  Today w are studying bubble wrap.  It looks like the shiny sun.  It's like half a bubble.  It makes the kkkk sound on one side of it, it's squishy.

Mia  Bubble wrap is bumpy.  It's soft like a pillow.  It looks like floating little bubbles.

Isabella   On Wednesday we got some Bubble wrap.  On one side of the bubbles it is soft and on the other side it is bumpy.  It looks like bubbles in the water.  And it was shiny.  It's crispy.

Kyla  Bubble Wrap is fun to pop and it is smooth.  On the other side it feels like little bubbles swimming round and round.  I pop bubble wrap.  It feels funny but it feels smooth like a smooth piece of string.  I like bubble wrap.

Kyle  The bubble wrap sounds like bubbles popping.  The bubble wrap feels likes it's bumpy and crumbly.

Molika 
 On Wednesday we were talking about bubble wrap.  It was clear like water and it sounded like popcorn popping in a pot.  The colour is shiny silver.

Jordyn  One morning Mrs Gribben gave us bubble wrap.  The bubble wrap was a smooth as a smooth and bumpy carpet.  It feels soft on one side and on the other side it is bumpy.  It sounds like a popping bubble.

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