Frosty stories

We are learning to use adjectives in our writing.  Try and spot them when we talk about the frosty morning we had on Wednesday 23rd.  Look at our speech marks too.

On Wednesday morning I didn’t want to get out of bed.  The cold leapt into my bed like a tiger.  It woke me up.  I ran out of bed like a blazing fire.  When I got dressed I thought I was in Ohakune.  When I went to school on my bike the cold came through my gloves.  I got to school and I was snuggled up warm in my classroom.  When I was eating my lunch I felt much better.

Asher

The grass looked like shivering ice on the freezing wet ground so I didn’t wake up.  But mum said “Get up now, you are going to be late for school.”  I said “Ok mum.”

Keanna

On a freezing morning I woke up.  “Shiver my timbers,” I said

Hannah

One frozen day I woke up and my feet were frozen so I stayed in bed.  Mum said, “Get up, otherwise you will be late for school!”  “Oh no,” I shouted.

Isabella

I woke up this morning and it was very cold.  I had a cold nose.  I didn’t want to get up because I wasn’t feeling well.  “Come to breakfast,” said mum.  I was feeling hungry.

Bianca

 

 

Farm Animals

We are working on giving our stories a title.  Can you see them...?

The Farm with lots of Animals

On the farm they have a lazy sheep going baa, baa.  Gallop, gallop goes the baby horses.  Moo goes the cows while they make creamy milk.  The pigs roll in the mud and they slop and slurp their scraps.  They are greedy creatures.

By Kyla

Dad’s Farm

A long time ago my dad use to live on a farm when he was little.  On his farm he had one cow and it gobbled the green grass. Munch, munch.  There was a fluffy white and brown dog.  One bull eating the fresh grass.

By Mele

The Farm Animals

At a farm there are lots of animals and some noisy, some quiet.  I like cows because they give us creamy milk.  It’s healthy for us.  The cows are big and strong.  There are cows, pigs and ducks.  Pink pigs roll in the mud and eat our scraps.

By Molika