Thursday, November 13, 2014

Fireworks Writing


Boom! Crash! Bang!
Fireworks can be very annoying when you are trying to get to sleep. They are just like the blazing hot sun.  They sound like an egg cracking.  They look like glittery hot light bulbs flying in the sky and exploding with laughter.  Zing! Crash! Boom!
By Asher

 

Fireworks boom out of the sky like popcorn bursting out of the machine.  Pop, Pop, Pop!  Sparkly and glittery, I want to light more.  The dog is in the shed and my brother is hugging mum.
By Hannah

 

At night I can hear the bang and crack of Fireworks.  It sounds like thunder.
By Cobie


I like the fireworks because it was banging on my house.  I like to go to sleep listening to the banging.  It sounded like a big balloon popping.
By Bianca

 

Bang, whiz, pop on Fireworks night.  I am sleeping in Leah’s room.  The fireworks sound like a gun shooting.  They are colourful and they light up the dark, spooky night sky.  I love Fireworks.
By Ammon

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